Joining
by Nancy Rae Kienzler
I watched two boats
sail their separate courses,
and thought how sad
that these two beautiful things --
so similar
and following parallel paths --
should nonetheless be disjoined
by all that sea between them.
Like clouds overhead,
blown across the same space by the same wind,
but separated by a slice of sky.
But then sometimes the wind
will catch one cloud a little more than the other,
and blow the two together,
and sometimes,
when you watch the sailboats in the distance,
you'll see their paths cross,
their bows kiss,
their sails intermingle.
And you realize that
neither sea,
nor sky,
nor any space between,
can keep two --
who are meant to be one --
from joining.
Sunday, July 22, 2007
Creative Writing: Sailing and Love
I'm posting this a few days early because I'm heading out on vacation.... Here's a sailing poem I wrote last year, to celebrate the wedding we got to witness on board the Victory Chimes.
(This poem is protected by copyright. Please do not use without permission.)
Have a great week everyone!
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Hi, Nancy! I'm writing from Rome, Italy. May I ask you permission to use your poem for a card? May sister and brother in law are celebrating their silver wedding anniversary. May I translate it in Italian too?
Thank you,
Emilia
Hi Emilia!
Yes, you have my permission to use this poem for your sister's anniversary card. It is fine also to translate it into Italian.
Would you mind sending me a picture of the card when you're done? It will be nice to know that my poem made it to Italy!
My email is nrkii@aol.com.
Thanks so much,
Nancy
It's a beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it with us!
I am hosting a "love your lake" Valentine's day fundraiser for the Community Sailing center in Burlington Vermont. Do I have your permission to use your poem as part of our event? Anna Palmer anna@winwinapps.com
Hi Nancy:
May I use your poem in a Birthday card for my man who is turning 55 today and loves to sail!!
Hi Judy.
Yes, you have my permission to use the poem in the card.
Thank you for asking!
Nancy
Nancy
After weeks of searching for a reading for our wedding ceremony, I find your wonderful little poem about sailboats. My fiancee's last name is Helm and we are having a sailing themes wedding (I alsolove sailing so the surname is very fitting!)
May we have your permission to include your poem in our wedding service next June?
Kind regards
Samantha
Hi Samantha,
Yes, you do have my permission. If you would, could you email me at my aol account, which is nrkii, and just let me know where you are? I am having fun tracking where this poem ends up. :)
Nancy
Nancy
Thanks for your post, I have emailed you, I hope I have got it correct. My email is samcowley1@yahoo.co.uk
I'm in Hampshire England, we are getting married in Cornwall.
Many thanks for your permission.
Sam (and Simon)
I was wondering if i can use this poem to send to my boyfriend he is overseas and loves sailboats and me so this is a perfect poem for him...
Hi Carrie.
Yes, you can send this to your boyfriend. Thanks for asking!
Would you mind telling me his generaly geographic location (state or country)? I'm just curious to see where this poem travels. :)
Be well.
Nancy
Hi Nancy - I just love this poem as both my fiance and I sail and have been on many sailing adventures around the world this seems the most apt poem to use as part of our wedding later this year. Would you mind if we used it during the service. We live in Chichester but are getting married in the Cotswolds. Thanks in advance Louise
Hi Louise.
I'm very flattered, and am happy to have you use the poem during your wedding service. All my best wishes to you and your fiance.
Nancy
Hi Nancy - I found your poem while trawling the internet for a suitable nautical themed reading for our wedding in Leaminton Spa, UK. Would you mind if my sister read your poem at our wedding?
Thanks, Alan
Hi Alan.
Congratulations on your wedding!
Yes, you have my permission to use this poem for the occasion.
Best wishes!
Nancy
Hi Nancy,
My fiancée and I love your poem and would like to use it as part of our wedding ceremony. We are getting married in Newport, RI, overlooking the water and think this poem is just perfect. Please let us know if ok to use.
Best,
Alison
Hi Alison.
Yes, I'd be happy if you used this poem in your wedding. Thank you for checking first.
Congratulations to you both!
Best,
Nancy
Hi Nancy, I am a civil celebrant in Western Australia and I ask your permission to use your poem at their wedding, it is a second wedding for both and they love sailing. I would acknowledge you as the writer.
Hi Lynne.
This sounds lovely. You have my permission! Blessings to you and to the happy couple!
Nancy
nancy!
i'm in sweden and marrying a true sailor. the poem is perfect... may i use it at my wedding in august?
your fan,
caroline
Hi Caroline.
Congratulations on your wedding, and my very best wishes to you both!
I'd be thrilled if you used my poem in your wedding. Thank you for asking permission -- it does mean a lot to me to know.
If you end up translating it or you put it into a wedding program, would you mind sending me a copy?
My email is nrkii@aol.com.
Thanks, and my best wishes again!!
Nancy
Hi Nancy,
My fiance and I met by chance on a sailboat we now have our own sailboat and are deeply in love. We are getting married in a few weeks and would love to use your poem in our ceremony.
Thank you
lisa and dave
Lisa (and Dave), please do use it!
Congratulations and best wishes!
Nancy
Dear Nancy can I ask your permission to use your beautiful poem in an assignment I am doing for school.
Rocallaghan55@gmail.com
Thank you
Dear Nancy can I ask your permission to use your beautiful poem in an assignment I am doing for school.
Rocallaghan55@gmail.com
Thank you
Rhonda OCallaghan
Hi Rhonda.
Thanks so much for asking!
I sent you an email earlier from my AOL account, but it might not have gotten through.
It is fine for you to use the poem for your school assignment. I'm assuming you would show me as the author of the poem (and YAY, how exciting for me!!)
I'd love if you could share info with me on what the assignment is. It makes me feel good to keep track of where this little poem travels. It's had an adventurous life so far. My email is nrkii on AOL.
Thanks again! Good luck!
Nancy
Nancy, may I send this to a beautiful, newly engaged couple who just got back from saling to the BVI's and fell in love on the sea? The words are perfect! Thank you for writing it!
Sharon
Hi Sharon.
Yes, feel free to share it with them. I'd be grateful if you could include my name as the author of this poem. Please also wish them all the best from me!
Thanks!
Nancy
Hi Nancy,
I would like permission to use this beautiful poem in a wedding reading.
Thank you,
Morgan
Hi Morgan,
I'd be happy to have you use this poem in a wedding!
Could you tell me where the wedding will take place? I'm always curious.
Best wishes.
Nancy
Are you still giving permission for your poem to be used? I would love to use it.
Yes, it's fine to use it. If you have a chance, please let me know how you plan to use it, and where you are located. It is fun for me to know. Best wishes.
Hi,
Can i use your poem during the wedding of my niece? They met during a sailing course.
Carmen, the Netherlands
Hi Carmen.
Yes, I would be pleased to have the poem used during your niece's wedding. Best wishes to you all!
Nancy
Hi Nancy,
This poem is a PERFECT reading for my sister's wedding in Homer, Alaska. Do I have your permission to read it at the ceremony? Thank you! Maria
Hi Maria.
Absolutely yes. Thank you for asking, and my very best wishes to your sister and her husband-to-be!
Nancy
Dear Nancy,
I am maid of honour to a dear friend, Marisa who, with her fiancé have sailed across the Atlantic on a round the world voyage, stopping off in Antigua to get married. I’ve been asked to do a reading and your poem is just beautiful and so perfect for them.
Please could I have your permission to read this at their wedding ceremony?
Many thanks,
Alex
Dear Nancy,
I am maid of honour to a dear friend, Marisa who, with her fiancé have sailed across the Atlantic on a round the world voyage, stopping off in Antigua to get married. I’ve been asked to do a reading and your poem is just beautiful and so perfect for them.
Please could I have your permission to read this at their wedding ceremony?
Many thanks,
Alex
Alex, that sounds lovely. Absolutely use the poem. Best wishes!
Nancy
Dear Nancy,
Thank you so much!
Alex
Hi Nancy,
I am a Wedding Celebrant and am having a Commitment ceremony next month. The couple are avid sailors and met in a sailing club. Your poem would be a beautiful touch to their ceremony. May I use it in my ceremony script? I've been searching for a beautiful piece, just like this, to make their special day.
I live in Texas and officiate both wedding and funeral ceremonies.
Thank you,
Debbie
Hi Debbie.
Yes, you absolutely have my permission to use this poem for the upcoming ceremony. With my very best wishes...
Nancy
Hi Nancy, I'm getting married to a sailor in Dec, could we use your poem please?
Yes. Best wishes!
Hi Nancy,
We absolutely love this poem. Do you mind if we use it as a reading at our wedding?
Thank you,
L
Hi,
Yes, you do have my permission. If you would, could you email me at my aol account, which is nrkii, and just let me know where you are? I enjoy knowing where this poem ends up. :)
Nancy
Hello Nancy, We are getting married on Portland Island British Columbia Canada, and we were wondering if your poem could be read at our ceremony?
Kindly,
Natasha
Natasha,
Congratulations! Yes, please do use this poem. Much love to you both.
Kindly,
Nancy
Hi - May I please use your beautiful poem for my sons wedding? He and his lovely girl are both sailors and it would be perfect. Sorry this is anonymous but I can’t sign in for some reason. Nic MacAulay-Smith
Hi Nic.
Yes, please do! Thanks for checking first. I love knowing this poem is still finding happy homes.
Kindly,
Nancy
Thank you! It will be in Dunkeld, Perthshire . Scotland x
Not too far from where my grandfather was born, in Moulin! Wishing them all the best.
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